Friday, November 18, 2011
THE 2 BROTHERS
Once upon a time their was 2 brothers that were named Luis c and Daniel we went to school and we where trouble makers.Luis and me packed eggs in our back packs and we laid them carefully and we went to school. we saw Kimberly and Martha and we threw eggs at them and they looked very ridiculous and Luis and me got hit by Martha and Kimberly by some rocks in the head and we ended up in the hospital.the next day they smelled like eggs because they didn't take a shower so then they got mad and chased me and Luis c and me and Luis c were on a wheel chair and that was the last time we heard about the stinky egg girls.so they messed with us and then they ended up in the hospital with some crutches and a purple eye.The End
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This story was good and funny at the same time. Watch your sentence structure and remember to indent.
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